and standing still in line and she's floating right by, i…

just a little pill	and that was all

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Posted by: darknotes Original: 5/10/2009 4:41 AM Views: 17 Comments: 1 eProps: 2 Read Comments Post a Comment Back to Your Xanga Site

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Sunday, May 10, 2009

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standing still in line and she's floating right by, i wanna be riding the train that we are on
I'm turning down the sheets and i know it repeats but it doesn't have to take so long
catching up on beats there's the verse it repeats till the chorus explodes in this song
checking the minor, checking the lights as they turn right on

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That is a nice poem or song. I like things like that which have an "in the moment" sort of feeling. I wish I could write like that.

Not to harsh your vibe, but if I might suggest that you use a darker background color, it would permit wide screen users the luxury of viewing your white text easier. Your default background color is white and the letters overlap upon it.

Posted 5/12/2009 2:13 AM by durandsynkula - reply

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